This is an exert (well actually it's all i've written so far) from my Freaky Story!
I 'm kinda copying you Tib but to bad! :b
She screamed as she heard the footsteps coming closer. She’d been able to hold it in for forever it seemed like while she hid behind the widest tree she could find. Luckily the tree she had found was hollow so she had sliced a door through the wood with her pocket knife. The trunk had been dead and dry so it was easy to cut. She silently opened the door and climbed in. When she stepped on the base of the trunk the tree creaked. Horrified that IT had heard the noise she whipped her head around towards the way she had come. Expecting to be caught like a deer in a headlight she silently sighed with relief when she saw nothing there. She continued to climb into the tree. Once she was all the way in she pulled the trunk door shut tight. Closing the door had taken away the bright light of the moon concealing her in complete darkness. She decided to light her lighter after checking to see if the light would be visible through the door.
do u like it? i wrote it on the way 2 mankato 2 watch Kt's choir concert. I used a bunch of stuff Mr. Thompson taught us. isn't that creepy!!!!
3 comments:
sweet i think its cool
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maliciousMEGabomb
oh my god that is SO GOOD!!!!!!!!! you gotten to be a so much better writer (not that you weren't b4!!!) yes you are copying me but oh well. you know that tree place she was in??? well in my story the dude have a tree thing like taht too!!!! and i didn't even cpoy you. you will see what i mean when i post taht part of the story. how did megabomb post a comment on your thingy???
THANX!!!!!!!!!!!!! after i looked at it i could tell i had gotten better 2.thats funny that the your story has the tree thing 2. meg was atmy house and i showed her my blog so she wanted 2 write a comment.
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